nice!
this is pretty awesome!! i like the progressions and melody. You might want to consider remastering it because it gets a little distorted at times.
nice!
this is pretty awesome!! i like the progressions and melody. You might want to consider remastering it because it gets a little distorted at times.
Yea I know,, it's old so I didn't know much about mastering.
interesting...
interesting experiment.......not my style i guess.
Fuck off, cunt.
Good start
Its a good start but it lacks complexity and seems to wander randomly about. I had this same problem when i began composing and the solution is just more experience. Try to work on the undermelody and make it "go somewhere." Also, take a look at what voices your using and make sure they flow together. At some points, the voices didn't mix very well and other points the song switched between two voices without any kind of transition. Keep composing though, you're doing good!
take a look at my songs and tell me/review them! spkid64
You should be less condescending when you write reviews, lest you want to come off as a jerk:
"I had this same problem when i began composing and the solution is just more experience."
...right. You're the guru whose been writing music for longer than me because you checked. I've been submitting music since 2005 (on my old account, poo-on-you, which I dont use any more). On my two newgrounds accounds I've submitted 49 songs over the course of almost three years. While the song is a little repetitive, it hardly wanders about randomly. Every phase was calculated and mastered with care, I hardly feel that the song goes nowhere.
By the way, I will keep composing, but it's an ironic thing to say since there's a good chance I've been composing for longer than you.
I never thought my songs would do this well. Thanks everyone!
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